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cedrico
07-03-2009, 10:54 AM
Here is a doodle for a character I'm doing right now, constructive comments and critics welcome!
THX
Hulahuga
07-05-2009, 10:11 AM
Nice doodle. Covered the expression very well :).
Perhaps the forehead is a bit long...
cedrico
07-06-2009, 01:02 PM
Here is a little boy, still blocking out form and expression of the young boy!
cedrico
07-06-2009, 04:40 PM
Ok today is a good day, here is an old mariner to end my two portraits of the day!
Hulahuga
07-06-2009, 05:41 PM
Good expressions :).
Keep on working
cedrico
07-09-2009, 02:13 PM
Here is one more, the gentleman's wife (up above)
montypython
07-29-2009, 05:04 AM
Regarding the first head of this thread: I like it, though I agree with Hulahuga that above the eyes, the head seems a bit too tall. However, with a few tweaks of the main facial features, you could have quite a nice charicatured sculpture- something that I am interested in dabbling in.

On as side note, I saw this sculpture earlier today and it got my brain going. Suffice to say, you, as well as a few other pieces, gave me some inspiration and the courage to try something new. Thanks, Cedrico!

Good Hunting!
montypython
07-29-2009, 05:07 AM
Great overall dynamics. I think, though, that the hairline on our old mariner is a bit irregular. However, the essence of the sculpture is excellent. You've captured the muscle distortion of the expression quite admirably; the cheeks are well-done.
Shawry
07-29-2009, 04:41 PM
hey dude, nice sculpts u have there.. :)
um, in regards to the female head sculpt, the only thing that really stands out to me is the hair lines, they seem to be going in the wrong direction.. atm you have the hair coming out of the top middle of her head and hanging down, and a bun at the back of the head, now to create a bun u need to pull a girls hair back right? so if u do , do that, the strands of hair would be more horizontal like all leading from the forehead into the bun, because you have grabbed the hair and twisted it up.. but at the moment it looks like the bun is magically attached and looks as if it is a separate piece of hair altogether.

but other than that they look great. nice work !