Overweight guy head

[astole]

My first attempt at creating a realistic person. Comments and critiques would be really appreciated. Thank you.

[montypython]

Looking good. I would have a few suggestions, though. Some of the following falls under the assumption that you are modeling an Asian character.

You could probably beef up the skin above the upper lip. The neck looks good, but the back of his neck and back need some more weight to them. Excellent work with the double/trip-chin.

The ears don't feel pudgy enough; Asian men, as I have observed, tend to have chunkier lobes and stick out to the sides a bit more. Think a bit more Buddah-style.

You might also want to try adding some of the neck-fold effects to the back of the head, near the base of the skull. I am not positive it is common, but I have seen it before.

Otherwise, I like the expression on his face. He looks like he has just finished a heaping bowl of noodles at a local noodlehouse.

Keep up the good work!

[astole]

Thanks Montypython.

I see what you mean about the back and the back of the neck. I'll bulk those up a bit and add some folds.

I knew there was something wrong with the area between the nose and lips but couldn't put my finger on it. Thanks for the buddha ear reference, it helps me picture it a lot better.

When I get some time I'll post some more updates. Thanks for all the critiques and suggestions, it's really helpful.