First works

[Rashnul]

Went back and fixed a few minor things. I would like peoples inputs and ideas. Don't be afraid to rip it apart, I'm use to it lol.

[melkior]

looks good so far rash heres some crits :

1) dont be afraid to over accentuate certain features that are non-human. For instance the eyes on both characters could use some enlargement or accenuation that helps focus on their alien-ness if you get my meaning. particularly even though the orange guy has squinty looking eyes- I feel like you could benefit from enlarging them to improve his overall look.

2) both fellows to my eye look 'muscular' but they lack muscle 'mass'. Its tight stringy muscle - which is ok, but then if they are that darn thin their faces are both too fat. Try bulking up the neck and shoulder areas and see if they feel more dynamic and stronger impact? just a suggestion to toy around with

keep up the good work